Writing is an opportunity to be anywhere in the world with people I adore- the characters.
My characters. After all, they are my babies. I gave them their physical appearence as well as characteristic traits
that appeal to me. And if I'm lucky, to those who read my stories.
My novella, Night Bird, actually was inspired by a song. A
haunting melody filled with beautiful lyrics about a woman who found a man
down on his luck in New Orleans and she took him in. The words in the song claim she taught him how to fly. So, she must be paranormal, right? Part of the undead. And that's how my what if took flight. : )
The afterlife…or new life, as I like to think of it. And that got my writer’s muse considering all kinds of things that could be possible if only
we believe.
Here’s an excerpt from the short story Night Bird.
A crashing wave knocked Emma off
her feet and plunged her beneath the water, grains of sand biting her skin as
the gushing tide tossed her upon the shore. She struggled to break the ocean’s
grip, her sodden skirt throttling her ankles as she tried to stand. Another
rushing wave pushed her to her knees. A heavy object slammed against her side
and drove them both aground.
A man.
Foamy bubbles gathered in a small pool of water where his body lay
indented in the sand. Her heart roared in her ears, drowning out the pounding
surf. In the past, she’d witnessed countless felons jump ship rather than face
the adversity of chains, starvation, and brutal prison beatings. Many saw the
island’s wide cove as a passage to freedom and often died trying to swim
across.
The dark shape lay unmoving beside
her. After only a brief glance she knew he was different. He had strong,
classic feature and a think robust body. She couldn’t squelch her curiosity.
Who was this man? A ship’s captain, perhaps? Or a meager fisherman with a run
of bad luck? Maybe he’d ignored the dangerous winds and threatening clouds, driven
by the greed she’d seen in eyes of other men. Fishing boats of all sizes had
been destroyed upon the deceptive coral reefs, led on by the tempestuous sea
witch that lured them beyond the next horizon.
Emma pushed aside the drenched charcoal
locks covering the man’s eyes and revealed thick brows and a strong forehead.
His cheeks bore stubbles of whiskers.
The white tailored shirt, although
frayed and worn, was that of a whaleman sailor, its hem floating up to expose
heavy, coarse trousers. Suddenly, his fingers caught the fabric of her bodice
and gave the slightest tug to draw her near.
“Help me,” he pleaded, his voice barely
more than a whisper as his arm dropped to his side.
Moisture blurred her vision at the
helplessness she’d heard, the desperation that filled his eyes. She blinked
back tears. How much longer must she witness death? Emma was unable to actually
save life, but could offer a brief reprieve for the tormented lost one. Usually
the men she encountered were the blackest of the lot: convicts, murderers, and
thieves were among those needing her most.
But this man’s appearance didn’t seem
to be that of a weak or starved convict. Instead, his body looked firm,
reasonably fit. Perhaps the made his living on the water. Lately, she’d
witnessed many Yankee whalers drawn to the Pacific, all eager to fill their
casks with valuable sperm oil.
His breath came out weak and unsure as his chest labored and fell. A
strong will to survive etched deep across his face and the vulnerable
expression played on her heart. He was someone’s son, perhaps a father, but
clearly a man unable to let go. With each painful gasp, his eyes pleaded,
asking the impossible.
But she knew…death was inescapable. It was the after life she hoped to
change. Already the icy water had
stiffened his body, his breathing faltered. Emma measure each one his last.
Even if she did manage to warm him, he would die of fever, the life-taking
chill never leaving his body.
He’d asked for her help…but was his need
to survive strong enough to carry the burden to eternity?
Precious seconds passed. The uneven rise and fall of his chest warned
her it was nearly too late. Is she didn’t decide soon, he’d be left to face the
judgment he’d earned in life without having the chance to reconcile whatever
desperate burdens were holding him back.
Emma lowered her head. No breath came from his lips, his eyes faded as
death stole over him. Swiftly, she pressed her lips against his neck; a
metallic taste filled her mouth when she pierced his skin. It took only seconds
to exchange his blood with the substance flowing in her veins. The wind howled
in protest and sprayed them with a mist of salt-drenched water while the waves
crashed around them.
It seemed forever and then…he moved.
“My crewman. Where is my crew?” he whispered.
Although his eyes shone with gratitude, would he still be grateful after
learning the conditions of his survival?
I loved Night Bird!
ReplyDeleteI had no idea you came up with the idea from a song...love it!
Your support has been awesome Christine! Night Bird is a beautiful song and so inspiring. : )
ReplyDeleteThank you for coming by.
Tere
Hi Linda,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you, traveling via imagination is the very best way to go!